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Post by Doopliss on Jan 28, 2011 2:45:22 GMT -9
After years of running the glitz pit, Jolene has retired. The new manager is a strong young koopa by the name of Kooper O'Donnell. People were battling it out in the ring. There were two guards with silver mohawks protecting an area behind the bar. "With Gonzales gone, it will be easier to get him to the top, Sir." said a guard from inside the building. "Just make sure he gets there." said a dark voice.
Meanwhile, in the pit, Galoom was registering. "Ha! As if we don't have enough goombas already! Although, you aren't the common goomba, are you?" said the contact. "Not exactly." replied Galoom. The contact gave him some forums. "So your basically the guy with a troubled past who ain't gonna tell me anything. Oh well. Take those to Mr. O'Donnell and you can get your fight name."
Galoom made his way to the manager's office. "You may go in." said a guard. "Take a seat. I don't want you feeling... uncomfortable?" said Kooper. Galoom took a seat. "Where are ya from?" said O'Donnell, reviewing Galoom's forums. "I don't know where I was born-" "I didn't ask where you where born." interrupted Kooper. "Twilight town." "So you're a hyper?" "Nope. I wasn't born there." "Hmm. You're... strange? How about Goomba Dusk?" "I'll take it."
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 28, 2011 3:21:48 GMT -9
Detective guy was off-duty so he was looking for a place to get money "Hm... glitz.... Glitz Pit! that's the place" he said, he walked over to the ticket booth "I'll take a blimp to the glitz pit" said Detective guy, "five dollars... not please" said the booth manager, secretly detective guy gave a one fake dollar, and four real dollars to the booth manager, the booth manager gave detective guy his ticket to the glitz pit, detective guy was there in one day, he went to the door "Hey is this where i sign-up?" said detective guy, "Well you fill in your forums here but otherwise you go to mister kooper to get your arena name but before you go somebody's already in there talking to mister kooper so please wait" "Thank you" said detective guy as he leaned against the wall.
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 28, 2011 14:48:55 GMT -9
"Good-bye, Galoom, or should I say, Goomba Dusk?" said Kooper. Galoom nodded and went out the door. He bumped into a mysterious shy guy. "Eh- Sorry." said Galoom. "No harm done, goomba." said Detective Guy. "I was just on my way to Mr. O'Donnell." "Right..." Galoom stepped out of the shy guy's way.
He reached the minor league room. A koopa greeted him. "Hey there, goom-stuff. Let me show ya 'round. By th' way, my name's Koppa." He walked over to two other koopas. "These are m' cronies, Robba and Soldia-Koop. The bony dude in the corner over there," Koppa pointed to a black dull bones. "is Shadow Bones. No-one messes with him, so I suggest y' don't either." A guard came through the door. "Well, looks like me and the gang are gonna go battle. See ya." Koppa, Robba, and Soldia-Koop went out the door.
Galoom glanced around. A large footless floating goomba approached him. "Hello, little goomba. I, am Goom-Zone, the ultimate goomba!" said Goom-Zone "And what does this have to do with me?" replied "I thought you looked like you could use an ally. I mean, everyone needs an ally." "I'll see what I can do. Let me settle in first." Galoom went to a dark corner and sat down.
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 28, 2011 15:33:34 GMT -9
"Hey, is this where i get my name?" said detective guy, "Yes! my fine sir it is" said kooper with smile, "Now could i see your forums?" said kooper holding out his hand, "Sure" said detective guy as he gave kooper the forums "Interesting but.... sad" said kooper as he raised his eyebrow, "Sorry for your loss" said kooper "Now by the looks of this, your arena name is!: Hero!" said kooper, "Now let the guard show you to your crib" said kooper, "Thank you, mister kooper" said detective guy as he walked out the door, "This Way" said a guard, the guard showed detective guy where to go, "This is it..." said detective guy as he walked into the room, galoom greeted detective guy "Hi, this is your/every minor league persons crib now by the way I'm galoom" said galoom, as he held out his hand for a hand shake detective guy shook his hand, "Oh and i almost forgot don't mess with shadow bones the guy in the dark corner" said galoom, "Alright" said detective guy "I'm detective guy"
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 28, 2011 16:44:16 GMT -9
"Right, your the shy guy I ran into in the hallway." said Galoom. "Now, if you'll excuse me-" Galoom pushed past Detective Guy. "I've got a battle to fight."
Galoom entered through the left door. The crowd cheered. "Today, we will have a one on one!" Announced Kooper. "We have on the left, all the way from twilight town, Goomba Dusk!" The crowd cheered. "And on the right, from the deepest, darkest part of rouge port, Ma-Mar!" The crowd went wild. "May the fight... BEGIN!!!" Galoom glanced about nervously. "Scared, child?" said Ma-Mar. Galoom dashed at the hooded man. "EAT THIS!" The dark grey goomba jumped heads first at Ma-Mar. The man only stepped to the left, calm as a cup of tea. Galoom hit the floor. "Augh!" He rose. Ma-Mar put his scythe to to Galoom's head. "May your soul rest a calm night in my scythe." Energy started to pulse from Galoom. His eye's grew weary and more dull then before. "N- Not yet." "Huh!" exclaimed the crowd. "Goomba Dusk, Goomba Dusk, beat his face, to the dust!" They chanted. Galoom let out a burst of dark energy, which blew Ma-Mar back. His scythe fell. Galoom reached for it. "Fool! Don't touch Kirth!" Said Ma-Mar, but Galoom had already wielded it. He felt strange. Suddenly he rose into the air. Souls poured from Kirth to Galoom. "Nooooo!!!" Shouted Ma-Mar. "Now I see... THE ULTIMATE POWER!!!" Galoom fell to the floor, and caught Kirth. "Feel my wrath!" He put the scythe forward. Dark energy pulsed from it. It hit Ma-Mar. "AAAAARGH!" He fell off the ring. "And the winner is Goomba Dusk!" said O'Donnell. Galoom simply made his way back to his room.
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 28, 2011 17:04:54 GMT -9
"Somethings wrong with him... i gotta figure out what" whispered detective guy, shadow bones walked through the door detective guy followed, "I guess I'm up" said detective guy as he walked through the left door and shadow bones walked through the right "And on the left we have: Hero!" said kooper the crowd cheered, "And on the right we have: Shadow bones!" said kooper the crowd booed, "May the fight Begin!" said kooper, "I remember you" said detective guy as he made a fist with his hands, "Long time no see right?" said shadow bones as he grabbed out a bone shaped as a knife, shadow bones ran at detective guy, detective guy dodged! he gave him a good punch to the face shadow bones got knocked back, shadow bones got up from the ground putting he knife in front of him "Ugh!" said detective guy, he pulled out the knife and rammed into shadow bones, shadow bones got knocked back, detective guy hopped on top of him knee first and then started beating him up, finally shadow bones kicked detective guy off and they started beating each other up, then they both fell down "Its a Tie!" said kooper, they were taken to the medic bay and then they were well enough to come back to their crib.
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 29, 2011 19:59:30 GMT -9
The lights shut off. "Huh?" said Galoom. He looked about. Everyone was fast asleep. "Must be lights out." The dark goomba closed his eyes.
A noise was heard. "Someone there?" He said, eyes shut. Galoom pulled out a flashlight and scoped the area. "Bowse... Uh-uh... King of... Goombas? Ye... that's me..." Said Goom-Zone in his sleep. In the corner opposite to Galoom lay Shadow Bones. He was sitting up, his red eyes glaring into the abyss, though he was asleep. Galoom got up. He went to investigate the restroom. The door was locked. He went to the exit. As suspected, it too, was locked. Galoom looked behind him. Shadow Bones seemed to be staring straight into Galoom's mind, but he was snoring silently, so he was not awake. He slowly bent into a natural sleep position. "I come from a scary place and that guy still scares the goomba out of me." Galoom whispered to himself. He looked forward again. The door was open. "My kinda place. Or is it?" The goomba walked through the door, only to run into Detective Guy. "Son of a BIRCH!" He exclaimed. "Keep it down. I'm investigating." Replied Galoom. "coughthat'smyjobcough Eh, sure, I'll help." "Didn't ask, but these are spooky hallways, even for me." Galoom took point.
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 29, 2011 20:35:04 GMT -9
Detective guy was looking forward "I think i should take point" said detective guy, gloomba looked behind him and stared into detective guys mask "Sorry, that's a no-go" said galoom, they walked forward hearing a voice "somethingsomethingsomething" they saw a mirror with red eyes in it galoom blinked the eyes weren't their anymore, all the sudden a arrow was shot at the wall above the mirror, galoom and detective guy looked behind them detective guy saw a note he walked forward it said -Next time i wont Miss- "Galoom look at this" he said giving the note to galoom, galoom looked at the note and then looked in front of him on the wall there was a hole where the note was, Detective guy turned around he looked inside the wall he saw a key hole "We need a Key" said detective guy "But first we need to get some rest" said detective guy, they walked back to their room galoom walked in, shadow bones was on his feet and then he fell into a sleeping position with a knife on his hand "go... to... sleep"
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 30, 2011 18:13:53 GMT -9
It was morning the next day. Fighters were already in the pit. Galoom rushed out to where the hole was last night. It was gone. "Must of been dreaming." He walked back to his room. "Galoom! Check this #&$% out." Galoom glanced at Detective Guy, who was at the ranking board. "So what?" He replied. " Here. 'The battles are getting tense! Teams must be formed. Manager O'Donnell will decide teams!' Blah blah blah... Here it is! Listen, 'Shadow Bones and Ma-Mar! And last but certainly not least, Hero and Goomba Dusk!'... That means we're gonna be beating baddie by baddie, second by second! Are you ready?" Announced the Shy Guy. "Yeah. Just don't get to mushy, this ain't a date."
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 31, 2011 1:10:18 GMT -9
Detective guy and galoom went to the battle ring the crowd was already booing at the 2 dark people aka Shadow bones and Ma-Mar, "Ready to die... detective?" said shadow bones, "Well um... no but i think you are aren't you about 60 years old from when i last saw you?!?" detective guy said as he ran at shadow bones he kicked him but shadow bones grabbed his leg and stabbed it! "AHH! sh**!" detective guy said. he let his leg down then grabbed the knife out of it and then he threw it at Ma-Mar! but shadow bones quickly took the blow!
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 31, 2011 2:39:56 GMT -9
"I appreciate your sacrifice, Shadow, but leave this next part, to me." Galoom dashed at the two shady guys. "Run for it hero! I'll hold 'em!" Galoom pulled out Kirth. "Bast*rd! Give it to ME!" Ma-Mar furiously swiped at Galoom, who dodged his every move. "Here it is!" Ma-Mar turned. Detective Guy punched him square in the face, who then fell. "Shad... Finish... This..." Shadow Bones faced Detective Guy with furious eyes. "Time to DIE!" He rushed at him with a sharp fist. Galoom stabbed him with Kirth. "Aargh! Foolish of you... Kirth drains souls. Souls. I don't have one." In the perfection of time he had, Detective Guy tackled Shadow Bones off the edge. "NOOO!" He hit the floor hard. The meds took Ma-Mar and the black dull bones to the healing center. "The winners are Goomba Dusk and Hero!" Announced Kooper. "We did it Galoom! And not bad team work if I do- Arrgh!" Detective Guy clutched his wounded knee. "I better get this checked out." "Right. Do just that. I'm going back to the room."
Meanwhile, at area B.L.A.C.K.
"Sir, they're climbing ranks fast, and I think they're onto him." said a Guard. "Darn it!" The dark man brought his fist down on the table. "That Kooper's too suspicious. Kill him." "Sir, we can't legally kill him unless he's on our side or doing evil deeds." "Since when did we care about the law? GET... IT... DONE... Simple, right?"
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 31, 2011 3:08:42 GMT -9
"I'm back" said detective guy as he was gonna high-five glaoom but galoom made a fist so they did a fist-bump, something laughed in the corner "Good times right detective" said shadow bones, "Why ain't you still in prison?" asked detective guy, shadow bones got up off the ground "I escaped, but you know... you were like a brother to me" said shadow bones, "Same here but not anymore" said detective guy, "Wait... y'all know each other?" asked galoom, "Yeah" they both replied, "Well I'll be the champion in a matter of days maybe... just maybe weeks" said shadow bones,
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Post by Doopliss on Jan 31, 2011 3:33:13 GMT -9
Galoom's personal cell phone rang. "Galoom, who is this?" Said Galoom. "Kooper O'Donnell. I'd like to see you in my... office." Galoom hung up. Detective Guy and Shadow Bones were staring at him. "Carry on with your... argument." The guards led him to Kooper's room. "Look, I'm a creepy guy, and this is having a negative effect on that, so try and hurry." Kooper spun his chair to face Galoom.
"I have a problem." Galoom raised a brow to show he was listening. "See, my best ears," Kooper nodded in the direction of three guards with cyan hair. "heard that I'm to be assassinated."
"Why am I not surprised? And what does this have to do with me?"
"I don't like your attitude."
"But you don't care?
"Nope. But to the point, you're the toughest fighter I can trust."
"Toughest? Because I beat Ma-Mar?"
"Yes. I need you to investigate."
"Talk to me."
"Last night, we had a power out. Someone tried to kill me."
"You couldn't catch him, and I have to look for clues to finding him."
"Right. Do you accept?"
"Damned right I do. Can I bring a colleague?"
"The more the merrier."
Both got up and shook hands. "Pleasure working with you, O'Donnell." "The pleasure is mine, Galoom. Good luck." Galoom went to his room. He would sleep until 12 PM.
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Post by Detective Guy on Jan 31, 2011 4:08:10 GMT -9
Galoom woke up looking surprised "Look Out!" said detective guy, shadow bones threw a knife right into galooms head! galoom woke up "You okay?" asked detective guy, "Yeah, i was just... dreaming" said galoom, Shadow bones got up to his feet and then galoom and detective guy did, "You look like you needa tell me something" said detective guy.
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